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Girl Meets Wedgies: Part 1
Riley Matthews sat on the couch in her apartment with Auggie, nervous. Topanga and Cory had decided to adopt another daughter, and they were bringing her home right now.
Both kids looked up as the door opened. Cory walked in, then Topanga, then the new daughter nervously walked in. She looked about Riley's age, was blonde with fair skin, wearing a long sleeved purple shirt with some jeans and boots. Both kids stood and smiled.
"Riley, Auggie, this is Sara. She's originally from the Poughkeepsie area." Cory said, smiling as Topanga set her hand on Sara's shoulder. "Hi...I'm Sara." She waved and Riley walked over with a smile "Hi...I'm Riley. Are you okay with sharing a room?" she asked. Sara smiled and nodded "Yeah that's fine!" Both girls smiled. "Now," Cory started "We were able to fit two beds in there, so why don't you two go on ahead?" Both girls nodded and headed to the room.
Riley opened the door, walking in. Sara came in behind her, rolling her suitcase and her other bag on her
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Well Jory This isnt a computer. Its a Wii U so the only thing you'll be seeing is me playing video games. This was done pretty well considering it's your fourth caption but you might want to make them a little longer. The pictures you choose are always nice to look at and your writing never disappoints. My only issue is the writing isnt very long. There isnt much else to say and these things have to be one hundred words long so I'm kind of just typing whatever comes to mind. I was watching the stream when you played it but I didn't get to Sayori's death because I lost connection.
I really enjoyed it but there were a few spelling and grammar mistakes. I must say you write the characters a lot better than most people do and Ozpin was really funny. Although it took a while to come out I believe in quality over quantity in most cases and this certainly had quality. I think you could have a future as a real author if you ever wrote a book. There is a hundred minimum words required for a critique so I'm just going to add some random words so I can post this. Popsicle, Lampshade, Cumulonimbus, Dentistry, and finally Horchata.
My favorite deviant CriticalZinogre blocked me for reasons I don't know. This especially sucks because he is the reason I made an account on this website. I wish I at least knew why. I won't be able to read his stories now.
Playing Deviant Roulette right now. I've seen some weird shit.
I've found a website that some of you writers may be interested in. I don't know how many people know it but its called writing.com. You know those pick your own path stories? This one let's you write stories with multiple paths and others can continue for you. Here is the link www.writing.com/main/list_item…
I am not a very creative person. I suppose I used to be before I was forced to start taking behavior altering medication. Now I feel like an empty shell. I can barely make my own decisions now. I spend most of my time just drifting through highschool and then coming home to bleakness. I have no inspiration. I bet whoever you are that is reading this is thinmking about how they will never get the time they spent looking at this back.

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BOLOTANKER Featured By Owner 1 day ago
Its ok if you can think of something, you might one day and that's all that matters, it'll come to you.
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VenomSilver Featured By Owner 17 hours ago
Thanks. You have some sweet tank pictures.
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Dragon-flame13 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2018   General Artist
Thanks for the watch
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flyscratch Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
thanks for watch
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zipskyblue Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the watch
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minerack32 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I've got a friend to take the pictures for me with their email, their email is shadowsteve01@gmail.com, just clarify they are for the Chloe wedgies
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VenomSilver Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2017
Yeah
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Tzoli Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for the watch!
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VenomSilver Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2017
Np
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Zhenya-Chan Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks for the watch! :D
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